Analyzing a Poem
Saturday, July 24, 2010
The Son is in Secondary School by Affian Sa’at

My badge has a Latin motto
Hope for the future
The future is hope
Or something

At times black crows try to interrupt
When we sing the National Anthem

It is difficult to maintain
The whiteness of my shoes
Especially on Wednesdays

I must admit there is something quite special
About the bare thighs of hardworking scouts

The Malay chauffeurs
Who wait for my schoolmates
Sit on the car park kerb
Telling jokes to one another

Seven to the power of five is unreasonable

On Chinese New Year
Mrs Lee dressed up
In a sarong kebaya
And sang Bengawan Solo

The capital of Singapore is Singapore

My best friend did a heroic thing once
Shaded all A’s
For his Chinese Language
Multiple-choice paper

In our annual yearbook
There is a photograph of me

Pushing a wheelchair and smiling
They caught me
At the exact moment

When my eyes were actually closed

This poem is more about the feelings and emotions of the poet as he recalled his good old schooldays. It gives a clear view of how the poet's schooldays were. Funny incidents showed that the poet was an innocent person in his schooldays.

There are twelve stanzas and there is no rhyming patterns in the poem.

In the first stanza; he was describing the badge and how important it is as it is a symbol.

In the second stanza: readers can imagine the situation when the poet was singing the National Anthem. Sometimes, several crows flying by disrupted the flow.

In the third stanza: the poet is saying that it was difficult to keep his shoes clean on Wednesdays maybe due to dirty activities.

In the fourth stanza: the poet was writing about how hardworking the scouts were.

In the fifth stanza: the poet stated that the Malay chauffeurs who waited for his schoolmates. They will sit on the car park kerb and telling jokes to one another.

In the sixth stanza: the poet talked about some Mathematics and say it is hard.

In the seventh stanza: he was describing a Chinese teacher who dressed up as a Malay, and sang a Malay song during Chinese New Year, which is so wrong.

In the eighth stanza: the poet was stating that Singapore is small as it's capital is itself.

In the ninth stanza; the poet described a "hero" who is his friend, do not care about his studies and shaded all same answers on an examination

In the last three stanzas: he said that he was posing with his eyes closed.
~Khor Wei Sean, 10:39 PM
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